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Thursday, October 30, 2008

Bare - HoN Blog (LG15:TR)

Bare

10.30.2008 12:26

Reed. Many thanks for your offer. But I’m not sure how much use I will be to the group in my current state. Physically I’m fine. But my armor has gone. I do not have my equipment. Or anonymity.

These things have been stolen from me. My resolve to fight is strong, but my ability has never been weaker.

I saw yesterday’s post. All of you are beginning to function well together. The dynamic is taking shape. I fear my intrusion will only serve to place your strengthening bonds off balance.

To join is to disrupt.

For this is not something she will do. And though she longs to remember the comforts of friendship, she cannot risk the lives of others in the process. Her enemy pursues her with more fervor than before. These nemeses will stop at nothing to see she is once again locked in their dungeons for another eternity. To bear such a horror a second time is beyond her imagination. So she will continue to run.

...


But what am I running toward?

-Maggie

Static

The others in HoN will help. But I'm not sure what I can do. -- Maggie

Posted by modelmotion at 1:36 PM

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9 comments:

  1. milowentOctober 30, 2008 at 2:12 PM

    why the shift to the third person near the end?

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  2. AnonymousOctober 30, 2008 at 2:47 PM

    It reminds me of the "princess narration" in Saturday's videos.

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  3. JenniPowellOctober 30, 2008 at 3:02 PM

    It means Maggie is a few short of a dozen.

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  4. KindredPhantomOctober 30, 2008 at 3:22 PM

    I think it was purposely done.
    It's interesting that maggie asks "but what am i running towards?"

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  5. AnonymousOctober 30, 2008 at 4:14 PM

    Yeah, with her abduction and experiences while incarcerated, methinks some of Maggie's marbles are AWOL.

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  6. AnonymousOctober 30, 2008 at 4:16 PM

    I think that the first-person is her 'Maggie' persona whereas the third-person is her 'Hymn-of-None' persona. In other words, she's focusing on her emotions in the first-person and focusing on her goals in third-person.

    Of course, the lack of marbles is probably what led to this separation of self and purpose. ;)

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  7. AnonymousOctober 30, 2008 at 5:01 PM

    She is a princess. Doesn't royalty talk in the third person.

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  8. AnonymousOctober 30, 2008 at 5:45 PM

    Wow. Maggie writes in short sentences. Just like Jonas. Must be destiny. Should be together forever.

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  9. QtheCOctober 30, 2008 at 5:47 PM

    SouthSideHope suggested in chat that the Saturday script perhaps got mixed into / was translated into the Thursday post.

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